Writing is hard work!

Chapter 4 of Dancing on the Edge is now up after a couple of rewrites. I don’t know what it is but I just couldn’t get happy with the chapter for a while. Do let me know what you think. This story is probably the most complex I’ve written with a lot more characters involved. Is it working for you as readers? I need some reassurance that you are enjoying this one…

7 thoughts on “Writing is hard work!

  1. Reader2 says:

    I’m loving it. Complex but totally engaging & readable.

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  2. Lu Mi says:

    OMG, I’m loving this! I smell another potential couple in the making 😀 You never cease to amaze me with your flawless intro to another character. Please, please, do keep writing even though I know it’s hard work 🙂 I love your stories too much to give up, especially with the withdrawals I’ve had every time I reached the end of each update!

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  3. bel7003 says:

    I’m loving it. And I also love that there are more than one couple. It’s great to see the interaction between them and how different couples have a different dynamic, even within the same lifestyle. I find that very interesting. I can’t wait to see how things will work out. I’m waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter.

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  4. Illyrie says:

    I also am loving this, although I do think that you may eventually need to branch out from the “Sub gets kidnapped” story, now that it’s happened to Dominic, Conner, Adien, Conner, Olly, Conner, Alister, Evrain, Nathaniel….

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  5. Nikki says:

    You have nothing to worry about. I have loved every story in this series and although I curse you every time for night writing the whole story in one go, I guess I’m just greedy like that, I always end up with a smile on my face while reading.
    I especially love all of the couples being in the story. I loved seeing Heath and Aiden and miss being able to read their story. Can’t wait until these get published. I want to buy the set!!

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  6. Dawn says:

    Keep it coming, your hard work is paying off in spades.

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  7. Shermin says:

    Oooo. I am loving this! Dave & Christian! Can’t wait to see what sort of sparks result from this yet another potentially wonderful pair! Good Work!:)

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